'Bout time I give you some feedback HQ
I personally don't like HQs that aren't Ld10. It just seems to not work in my mind.
Also, as the Lion Commander and Angel Commander are practically the same unit with no differentiating rules, it would have been simpler to just make the Angel Suit and upgrade for the Lion Commander.
I like the Lion Command team, but why doesn't the angel Commander get a command team?
I assume the Regular Command team is the IG Option in practice. However its strange that only here do you include SRs for a HQ. They're also not easy to comment on, as you didn't include the rules for these rules.
I'd suggest including "Upgrade" to the unit comp for Fire commander and Chained Psyker. Including a statline can make it a little ambiguous otherwise.Wargear
I'll say here, its an interesting method you've used to minimiss repeated text for wargear selection. I was genuinely surprised the Chaos Codex (and I assume later 6th ed coexi) don't do something similar.
Small error for Shield Generator, as you've writen "A Combat Shield confers a 4+ Invulnerable Save"
Zeomega link seems a little OP, and there is an error.
"In addition, this model and any unit it is attached to
may fire in Overtwatch at BS 2"
added in red what I assume you meant to include
I think the Zeo-Sys could be a little cheaper. there is a chance that every player turn the pilot is going to go on a rampage, which isn't very useful at 60pts extra.Elite
A little inconsistancy in the Angel suit. The Angel Commander is S5, while the regular suits are S4. If we assume pilot strength doesn't affect suit strength like Tau Battlesuits, then they should be the same.
I like the Squad Invul of the Golem suits, however it might be a good idea to include that they lose 4++ when their squad drops to 3-models or less. Otherwise someone will come along, lose one suit, and claim their unit still has 4++.
Error in Water teams:
"Any Water Corporal or Water Sarge
may purchase Meltabombs........5pts"
Again, assumption in red
Thats all I can really think to say right now. Looking great so far ^_^