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Title: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on January 17, 2014, 09:11:11 AM
Some of you probably know about my house ruled supplement Warhammer 40,000: Covert Operations (http://secondsphere.org/index.php?topic=874.0). If you don't, check it out. In any case, I want to add a number of fluff snippets to it to make it more like an actual supplement and less like 20 pages of nothing but rules. Sadly, I have neither the time nor the creativity to write all that.

Which brings me to the point of this thread. I need people to write some stuff for me. They can be posted in this thread, or you can send me a link if you decide to post them elsewhere for some reason. The rules are as follows:


I look forward to seeing what you come up with :)

EDIT: if you want to be credited, just tell me the name you wish to be credited by.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Chris on January 17, 2014, 10:53:29 AM
Sounds fun! I'll try and knock together some kind of short story snippet from a human point of view... Could either do a sentry or a raid, what you want?
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on January 17, 2014, 11:56:04 AM
Both? ;)

I had a look at the planetstrike supplement and that was at least 50% fluff. Really, I can use anything you give me.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Chris on January 17, 2014, 07:27:05 PM
Splendid! Well that was fun! I've written up a short story focusing on an Imperial team, I'll stick it here for now...
If its not what you're looking for, no worries. If you want anything different or changing, let me know. (Its spot on 2 side of A4)

I might try and work on something from from a completely different point of view....

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Dra'Tuisisch-Novae on January 18, 2014, 03:23:55 PM
Question - does it have to be about a successful covert operation? I had an idea from a "heroic sentry" kind of perspective. Though now I think of it, it might lend itself more to the "heroic but futile" archetype...
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on January 18, 2014, 04:46:47 PM
Splendid! Well that was fun! I've written up a short story focusing on an Imperial team, I'll stick it here for now...
If its not what you're looking for, no worries. If you want anything different or changing, let me know. (Its spot on 2 side of A4)

I might try and work on something from from a completely different point of view....

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Looks good. You will be in the next update. I look forward to anything else you write :)

Question - does it have to be about a successful covert operation? I had an idea from a "heroic sentry" kind of perspective. Though now I think of it, it might lend itself more to the "heroic but futile" archetype...
That's still fine. You can play as either side, after all.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: InsaneTD on January 23, 2014, 08:19:06 AM
Shas'El Vral was standing in his command bunker looking at the map floating in the Strategy Tank, zoomed right into the area surrounding her base, she still couldn't workout where the Gue'Vesa were hiding. She was hoping the trooper standing in the XV-25 next to her could help track them down and eliminate them.

"Tell me about the last raid", The suit said. If anyone else had spoke to her this way or even continued wearing a suit in her bunker, she would of requested support from another Cadre, but Shas'O Shasserra had sent this squad herself and Vral wasn't about to say no to the Commander.

"They are getting into the base in the middle of the night, passing several drones moving in random patterns and some sentry towers. They broke into a hangar and planting fusion bombs on several suits, including the prototype I was supposed to test in the upcoming attack. They are managing to avoid all the patrols and sentries coming in, then they attack on their way out. We didn't realise they had even been into the hangar until the bombs detonated."

"I know how they are getting in." The Stealth suit turning towards her, "They have infiltrated your communication system, that's how they have known what to attack. And that you were calling for help."
"That doesn't explain how they are getting in...."

"No, but this does." The suit opening up to reveal a Gue'Vesa inside. "I'm sorry about this." He said as he fired the fusion blaster at the commander, the suit closing back up as he did. The beam sweeping around the room, killing several Shas'La and Shas'Ui and destroying consoles. The suits stealth field activating as he moved to the nearest door and out in to the corridor, attacking the Shas'Vre bodyguard running to save his commander.

Alarms were blaring all over the base as the Sergeant regrouped with the rest of his squad on top of a nearby ridge. "The charges planted?"
"Yeah Sarge, right where the techpreists told us too."
"Good, let's get out of here before they blow."

The squad moved quickly down the hill, the stealth fields in each suit activating as the went.



I haven't got a name for this one but I guess that doesn't matter much.

Edit: Might want to double check the spelling of Shadowsun's name. :P
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on January 23, 2014, 11:52:27 PM
Nice one. That'll be in the next update too (which I have started on).

I could do with a load of shorter stuff by the way. Little snippets only a few lines long that I could use for a timeline, or quotations I can scatter around. I've been trying to think of some, but all I could come up with was this:

"Sir! We're being infiltrated from behind!"
"Waste my time with another joke like that and I'll have you cleaning the latrines for a week, Jones."
"..."
"Jones?"
- Final transmission log for Guardsman Jones. KIA while on sentry duty.

I lack creativity when writing fluff. I always wind up thinking up bad puns and innuendo.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: InsaneTD on January 23, 2014, 11:58:31 PM
Probably find plenty about real world spec ops stuff online that would fit.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: InsaneTD on February 06, 2014, 06:54:18 AM
Not Again.

"SERGEANT!"

Joe cringed, he knew he was the one being called and he knew he wouldn't like what he was volunteering for. He jumped up and ran out the door to the Officer bellowing for him. He came to a halt and saluted the Colonel. "There you are Sergeant Dubinski. Just got a mission down from HQ that I think your squad would be perfect for." Joe mentally cringed again, "When's the briefing sir?"
"20 minutes Sergeant, make sure you're squad is geared up and ready to go." The Colonel started turning away when Joe spoke up, "What kind of mission is it Sir?" When the Colonel just looked at him, "So my men know what kind of gear to pack, Sir."
"Full kit Sergeant, any speciality gear will be provided."


Writing bug bit me. Had to write something and though I might write this up for you.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Chris on February 06, 2014, 10:16:23 AM
Darkness... That was all he could see. Sentry post four was the newest instalment on the compound, but yet it seemed the most useless. What good was it having a look out if he could only see darkness?
Webber turned and lit a cigar. Smokes and caffeine were the two small luxuries he had been allowed for his sixteen hour stint as lookout. He had already nearly fallen asleep twice, the sounds of the night surrounded him and the wind chilled him to the bone, sapping him of all energy. Once again he shuddered to keep himself from falling asleep.

An owl screeched somewhere in the trees and he heard the sound of rustling in the brush. At least something was going eat well tonight he thought as he unwrapped another protein bar. Again there was a crunch of broken twigs and the rustle of movement.
Lifting his magnoculars to his face, webber began to investigate. Nothing, just more darkness. Suddenly Webber felt warmth, erupting from his stomach, instinctively his began to investigate with his hands, as he looked down he saw his tunic thick with blood and a long scythed Tendril bursting through from behind. He fell forwards and rolled onto his back just in time to see a shadow leap from the sentry post and melt back into the darkness... The dark once more surrounded Webber, thick, impenetrable darkness, darkness which no light could dispel. 
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on March 01, 2014, 09:32:35 PM
Thanks for your help so far. Version 1.4 is now out (http://mabbz.deviantart.com/art/Warhammer-40-000-kill-team-revamp-343676495), and some of your work has made it in. The pieces that haven't been included may still be added in the future, I just haven't gotten around to it yet.

I have had to make some modifications to all the stories, but it was only to fix grammatical errors or shorten the piece so it'd fit in a nice gap. If you have any problems or think there is something that needs changing, let me know. The only other change was to Chris' last post, where I changed a sentence from "Nothing, just more darkness" to "Darkness there, and nothing more". I saw a chance to quote Poe, and I couldn't resist  ;D

If you have any more stories or quotes, please post them! There's plenty more gaps to fill, and I wouldn't mind a few more two page stories either.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Archon Sharrek on March 02, 2014, 11:16:54 AM
Right, so I have one, but it's not directly related to the actual combat, more or less the extraction. I have another Tau based one that's in the works.

Also, some quotes, if appropriate.

There's nuffin quite like crawling on yer belly through mud and who know what else, under fire, and cutting through wire, just to blow some unsuspecting fool up! Makes life worth livin' it does! - Trooper Harkan, Demolition Specialist, 512th Kilgravan Combat Engineers.

They came in the night, silent as ghosts. We never knew they'd taken the commander until he didn't show for morning inspection. All the Commissar found was his hat, all bloody like. - Private Chernovik's Testimony, Seraphicus Prime Raid Incident.

Ah, Sabotage. My favorite pastime, if you must know. Befouling the inferior machines of the Imperium, and tearing down the fettered triumphs of the Cult Mechanicus is always a pleasure. Glory to the Great Powers! Glory to the Scrap-code! - Heretek Odazmuth Gamma-177, of the Terrorsmiths of Kalesh.

Not the right men for the job, sir? With respect, sir, my men can put a las round through a coin at four hundred paces, every time. You need someone sniped sir, you send us, not those fool Ratlings. - Sergeant Tiberius d'Redgrave, 51st Royal Tythun 'Blue Bloods' Heavy Infantry.

We found the sentries dead, laying pools of there own blood, see. Then the ammo dump exploded, killing a good ten men, and 'alf a dozen Departmento boys. Captain sent us down to investigate, and then the power shut off, the containment fields failed, even though the cogheads told us they couldn't. 'Course then we had the local wildlife, all sharp teeth and razor claws in the base. The reason I ordered the evacuation, sir? That was when I found the Cap dead, his thumb missing, and the release codes for the [redacted +Inquisitorial Clearance Vermilion Required+] input into the prison cogitator. I didn't want to stick around when [redacted] came for his revenge. - Lieutenant Theodore, 101st Jannisari Rifles, executed upon Inquisitorial Order.

Edit: Minor grammatical errors that slipped past me.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on March 02, 2014, 12:16:40 PM
Nice, especially the second one. I'll take them  :)

I'm currently working on small entries for a timeline, like this:

596.M41
A small team of Tau stealth suits successfully destroy the shield generator in a Necron outpost. The outpost is destroyed by orbital bombardment without complications.

942.M41
A veteran Imperial Guard Kill Team is sent to assassinate the Ork warlord Ghazghull Thraka on Armageddon. Their bodies are returned by catapult.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: InsaneTD on March 02, 2014, 12:23:31 PM
I love that last one. I've actually been looking for inspiration and that has tickled my fancy. Might go write a short using it. :P
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: Mabbz on March 02, 2014, 02:25:53 PM
I'm planning on having at least three assassination attempts on Ghazghull in the calendar, with increasingly amusing results.
Title: Re: Help needed (Covert Operations)
Post by: InsaneTD on March 02, 2014, 02:56:32 PM
I may steal those and write stories for them. :P