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Offline Narric

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Fluff for a Project
« on: July 05, 2012, 06:20:04 pm »
This thread is related to a project I'm working on, using old information from a failed project led by others.

I'm keeping the fluff seperate, becuase then I can have it critiqued away from the army list it will guide.

I have one request. If you recognise the project this is for, please don't blab it. I'm not sure how the old project leaders would really react.

I'm going to be trying to write the fluff from the point of view of every other race, up until I finally reveal the project. This means a lot of different styled writings, which will be a fun test of my writing skills.

For this first tip-bit, I must thank Thantos for his unique way of accepting contest entries.



+++ INCOMING ASTROPATHIC COMMUNICATIONS: +++
+ ASTROPATHIC RECIEVER REF: HS5163-454+
++ FOR THE ATTENTIONS OF CLOSEST COMBAT FLEET++
++ SUBJECT: SYCLOBEC ENCOUNTER++
++++++ DOWNLOADING ... DOWNLOADING ... DOWNLOADING ... UPLINK SUCCESS ++++++

+ DISPLAYING CONTENT +
TO ANY PATROLING FLEET WITHIN RANGE OF EASTERN FRINGE TERRITORIES, REQUEST PRIORITY FOR ASSISTANCE.

HOSTILE ALIEN THREAT ENCOUNTERED.

ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY. HUMANOID APPEARENCE. DEVIATION FROM IMPERIAL PURITY BY GROWTH OF WINGS ON BACK.

PSYKERS PRESENT DECLARE NO CHAOTIC TAINT SENSED.

BEWARE WHEN MAKING CONTACT WITH IMPERIAL STRONG POINTS. PDF AND IMPERIAL GUARD REGIMENTS PRESENT UNDER SUSPISCION OF TURN-COAT INTENT.

ALL COMMISSARS PRESENT IN REGIMENTS HAVE BEEN KILLED BY ENEMY FIRE. POST BATTLE ANALYSIS SHOWS LOCATIONS WERE INTENDED TARGETS DURING LATER BATTLES OF ENCOUNTER.

ANTI-INFANTRY HEAVY ARMOUR PROVEN TO BE ADVENTAGEOUS. ENEMY ARMOUR NOT GREATEST CONCERN. ENEMY IS FEW OF NUMBERS, BUT SHOW ELITE PROWESS.

SEE VISUAL APPENDIX FOR
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Offline Lord Sotek

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Re: Fluff for a Project
« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2012, 12:18:51 am »
...Tet Krom?

If so, I'm still working on that stuff, though everyone else seems to have left. Also, if that's what it is, then it shouldn't be hard at all to have both groups exist simultaneously but separately.
Often I hear delusional ramble like "I painted and collected my army as ultramarine tyranid hunters....but Pedro is really good, so now I'm using him, but I'm just going to call him Jimbob-Fistpumper, cause that fits with my